*laughs* ohhhh man, I don't know. I was pretty much completely loopy, jet lagged like whoa and I'd been up for about 30 hours straight. I was convinced the first draft of the story I eventually posted was utter trash, and so I whipped up this completely sarcastic sorta kinda six sentence thing. It's not so much a "story draft" as it is a peek into my deranged brain at that point in time. The things porn_this_way puts up with... heh...